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bloomygirl315
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I really want to improve before i go off to college this year, so i'm looking for some good sturdy, helpful critiques ^_^

This first one is of my necromancer character cunquring a city. I listened to "I wish I had an Angel" by Nightwish - the part where they say "burning angel wings to dust" had a big role in this picture.

This is another one of my Necromancer sitting shirtless ona couch, playing his skeleton guitar. . . this basically just gave me the excuse to draw a shirtless man.

The next ( Heart Break Casino ) is. . . a guy wearing pink and still mantaining his masculinity X3

The last one ( Foster ) is a sketch i did during class one day of a friend.

Obviously since these works are finished (except the last one, but i'll never go back to the one) I wont go back and fix things. However I could really use some critisizm that I can use for future drawings ^_^

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16th June 2008 03:10 a.m.
knuckles930
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They seem good to me, but than again I'm not really good at critique. But maybe you want to make one point stand out more, the focal point. Like in the first one, for the background/sky, you might want to use a bit more
gray tone to make the whole blend in more with the front. That way you get more focus on the main character.
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16th June 2008 22:24 p.m.
bloomygirl315
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oh, yeah! I never really think about focal points XD;; thanks!!

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19th June 2008 18:28 p.m.
el-hombre-vegetal
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you should check on the way you make heads though, I think they're a little ... unnatural, even for manga, and keep references at hand (your torso should be about two times your head) stuff like that, you know, anatomy and proportions, I also think your necks are a little empty, but that's just me, I like neck lines, also do some shading (of course this all is if you want to)

also, an art teacher I had told me never to draw on regular notebooks, carry a sketchbook, even if you get bored on your classes just get your sketchbook out and draw.

sorry if I come a little strong.

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25th June 2008 02:03 a.m.
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